Salmon\'s Ability Which I Long For
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I want to have the salmon\'s homing instinct. It\'s not clear how salmon memorize their original habitat, but the most reliable hypothesis tells that salmon come back to their home by using the magnetic field of the earth with some chemical processes. The reason why I want to gain this ability is because of an urge to rest. I\'m not entirely poor at seeking a way to go home, but I can\'t find my way home unless I have my cellphone. I always use a digital map to navigate, and I continuously check whether I\'m going the right way. Thus, I can\'t rest during the whole journey, instead, I am vigilant at all times. I want to draw breath while appreciating the outside view when I get on a bus; however, tension is maintained even on a familiar path. Therefore, if I can gain the ability of salmon, I can enjoy the beautiful scenery and take a rest on the move.
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I want to have the salmon\'s homing instinct.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s not clear how salmon memorize their original habitat, but the most reliable hypothesis tells that salmon come back to their home by using the magnetic field of the earth with some chemical processes.
>> It\'s not clear how salmon memorize their original habitat, but the most reliable hypothesis tells us that salmon comes back to their home by using the magnetic field of the earth along with some chemical processes.
The reason why I want to gain this ability is because of an urge to rest.
>> CORRECT!
I\'m not entirely poor at seeking a way to go home, but I can\'t find my way home unless I have my cellphone.
>> CORRECT!
I always use a digital map to navigate, and I continuously check whether I\'m going the right way.
>> CORRECT!
Thus, I can\'t rest during the whole journey, instead, I am vigilant at all times.
>> CORRECT!
I want to draw breath while appreciating the outside view when I get on a bus; however, tension is maintained even on a familiar path.
>> CORRECT!
Therefore, if I can gain the ability of salmon, I can enjoy the beautiful scenery and take a rest on the move.
>> CORRECT!
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