Samiljeol

Samiljeol is speical day! During the Japanese colonial era, one of the independent activists, Yoo Kwan-Sun did Independence Movement! But she is only girl. So this day, We thank to independent activists like Yoo Kwan-Sun. But our students like this days because of another reason. We can take a rest!!!!!!!!! Yeah~~~~! Samiljeol is holiday, too. So we can take a rest and spend time with family.^^

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Samiljeol is speical day!

>>Samiljeol is a special day.
During the Japanese colonial era, one of the independent activists, Yoo Kwan-Sun did Independence Movement!

>>During the Japanese colonial era, one of the independent activists, Yoo Kwan-Sun, started the Independence Movement.

But she is only girl.
>>But she is only a girl.

So this day, We thank to independent activists like Yoo Kwan-Sun.

>>So today, we are thankful to independent activists like Yoo Kwan-Sun.
But our students like this days because of another reason.

>>But our students are like this, these days, because of another reason.
We can take a rest!!!!!!!!!

>>Correct

Yeah~~~~!

>>Correct
Samiljeol is holiday, too.

>>Samiljeol is a holiday, too.

So we can take a rest and spend time with family.^^

>>So,we can take a rest and spend time with our families.^^