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2018-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kite

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Hi there!

Thanks for answering the question. I agree with what you said, finding a new job these days is a very difficult task, there are lot of competition out there. I hope that you find a new job so you can support your daughter!

These days I am looking into new job after retirement.

>> These days, I am looking or searching for a new job after retirement.

As you know my retirement will be soon.

>> As you know I will retire soon.

Thanks to the advance of medical science, people\'s lifespans are getting longer.

>> Correct

So I have to find a new job or I have to find something to do.

>> Correct

Or>> So I have to find a new job or to find something to do.

And my daughter has to study for a long time, I need much money for her.

>> And my daughter has to study for a long time, I need enough money for her studies.

So I am thinking seriously after retirement but there is a food result.

>> So I am seriously thinking about it after retirement but there is a good result.

If you have a good idea for me, don\'t hesitate.

>>Correct

Or>> If you have a good idea, don’t hesitate to tell me.

Finding new job or something it is ver difficult poblem to me but anyway I have to solve that question.

>> Finding a new job or something is a very difficult problem for me, but anyway I have to solve that problem.

It\'s my concern and I need to look into these days.

>> It’s concern for me I need to look into it these days.

 

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