sanitary food industry

2012-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nica

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I felt compelled to write this review after having pizza at Vicent's Diner. It was because I was disgusted by seeing the process the pizza was made. I cannot uderstand why the health department does not make any measure to close down the restaurant since I worked in the food industry for several years. One of employee smoked while making pizza. Ash of cigarette falled and was scattered. I just walked out because I insist on sanitary food handling whatever I eat.

강사 첨삭

Hi Sophia!!!^_^ Thank you for your composition. I also felt disgusted upon reading what you have experienced. I hope the government can do something about it. I made some corrections on your sentences. You can just check them. I\'ll see you in class tomorrow. Take care!^_^ __Teacher Nica__   I felt compelled to write this review after having pizza at Vicent\'s Diner. >> I feltlike I am compelled to write this review after having dinner at Vicent\'s. It was because I was disgusted by seeing the process the pizza was made. >> It was because I feltdisgusted in seeing the process on how they make their pizza. I cannot uderstand why the health department does not make any measure to close down the restaurant since I worked in the food industry for several years. >> I don\'t understand why the health department did not made any measures to close down the restaurant. I have an idea of this since I worked in the food industry for several years. One of employee smoked while making pizza. >> Oneofthe employee is smoking while making the pizza. Ash of cigarette falled and was scattered. >> The ash of the cigarette fell and wa scattered at the pizza. I just walked out because I insist on sanitary food handling whatever I eat. >> When I saw that I walked out and I insist ofhaving sanitary food handling in all the food that they are preparing.

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