Santa Clause
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you belive in Santa Clause,Teacher Mayleen?
Well, I belive in Santa Clause and I all ways leave a cookie and a cup of milk on Christmas for Santa Clause to eat or drink.Santa Clause lives in North Pole.
Santa Clause travels the world with Rudolph who has red sparkling nose.
Santa Clause weres red and furry clothes and he also weres a red furry and pointy hat.
I hope that I will get a good presant this year from Santa .
강사 첨삭
Hi Emma!
It\'s a great day to make some more
wonderful memories to add
to your already blessed life! Happy Friday!:)
I used to believe in Santa Claus. That was when I was a child like you.
It\'s okay to believe in Santa Claus. You have to remember that he only give presents to children who were obedient, kind, and polite the whole year. So to receive a present from Santa, you have to be a good girl at all times, okay?^_-
Thank you dear for this composition. I\'ve read it well.
See you next week. Have a great weekend.
~T. Mayleen~
Do you belive in Santa Clause,Teacher Mayleen?
>> Do you believe in Santa Claus, teacher Mayleen?
Well, I belive in Santa Clause and I all ways leave a cookie and a cup of milk on Christmas for Santa Clause to eat or drink.
>> Well, I believe in Santa Claus and I always leave a cookie and a cup of milk for him on Christmas eve.
Santa Clause lives in North Pole.
>> Santa Claus lives in North Pole.
Santa Clause travels the world with Rudolph who has red sparkling nose.
>> Santa Claus travels the world with his reindeer, Rudolph, who has a red, sparkling nose.
Santa Clause weres red and furry clothes and he also weres a red furry and pointy hat.
>> Santa Claus wears red, furry clothes. He wears a red, furry, and pointy hat too.
I hope that I will get a good presant this year from Santa .
>> This year, I hope to receive a good present from Santa.
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