Santa\'s secerets
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi! I\'m Santa I\'ll tell you two of my biggest secerets. First, I married. I have a wife that is called Fairy Lady Godmother. Yes, \'Fairy\' and \'Lady\' and \'Godmother\' is really her name. That\'s why my name is Santa Lord Claus. Second, I am really thin. Thin like the kindest and fairest Heather. But her heart is tender and she cries every time she reads a sad story. I soothe her and give her one of her favorite ornamental owls. They\'re pretty tiny though. I just put in a pillow, that\'s all. Bye! These are two of my biggest secerets.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful day to you Heather! It is quite surprising that you know some of Santa\'s secrets and sharing them with me. We will talk about it more in class. I will see you then. Take care! ~ T. Lyn
Hi! I\'m Santa I\'ll tell you two of my biggest secerets.
>>Hi, I\'m Santa and I will tell you two of my biggest secrets.
First, I married.
>>First, I am married.
I have a wife that is called Fairy Lady Godmother.
>>I have a wife named Fairy Lady Godmother.
Yes, \'Fairy\' and \'Lady\' and \'Godmother\' is really her name.
>>Yes, \"Fairy\", \"Lady\", and \"Godmother\" are really her names.
That\'s why my name is Santa Lord Claus.
>>So my name is Santa Lord Claus.
Second, I am really thin.
>>Correct.
Thin like the kindest and fairest Heather.
>>As slender as the kindest and fairest Heather.
But her heart is tender and she cries every time she reads a sad story.
>>However, her hear cries whenever she reads a sad story.
I soothe her and give her one of her favorite ornamental owls.
>>Correct.
They\'re pretty tiny though.
>>Correct.
I just put in a pillow, that\'s all. Bye!
>>Correct.
These are two of my biggest secerets.
>>These are two of my biggest secrets.
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