sashimi is my love.
학생이 쓴 원문
Our department is having a get-together this evening.
We are going to the japanese restaurant.
Although I am sick because of a fever from a cold I'll join the meeting.
Because I love sushi and sashimi very much. and japanese food, it is 30000 [이름] a head, not cheap for me.
So I think I'll fill my self with a sashimi and I'll go home.
hahaha..
Am I cheap? ^^
Anyway. When I went to the hospital a doctor asked me.
"Do you have a headache?"
I want to say that I have some headache which is dopey.
so I said
"I have a stupid head."
as soon as I finished my word he laughed loudly.
and repeated " stupit head, stupid head...."
hum...Is it funny?
I blushed at his laugh. but I'm not upset
It's just laugh. ^^
bye lei~~~^^
강사 첨삭
Hi Ju [이름]!
I believe that you need to work a little more on writing and your sentence structure skills though you have tried your best. Keep on trying and practice more often. Writing me everyday would be very helpful.
Lei J
Our department is having a get-together this evening.
>>correct
>>Our department is having a party this evening (better)We are going to the Japanese restaurant.
>>we are heading to a Japanese RestaurantAlthough I am sick because of a fever from a cold I'll join the meeting.
>>Even though I have a fever due to the cold I had, I will still attend the meetingBecause I love sushi and sashimi very much. and japanese food, it is 30000 [이름] a head, not cheap for me.>I love Japanese food like sushi and sashimi but they cost too much for me. We could spend 30000 [이름] per person.So I think I'll fill myself with a sashimi and I'll go home.>>So I will eat a lot of sashimi before I will go homehahaha..>>JAm I cheap? ^^
>Do you think I뭢 cheap? Anyway. When I went to the hospital a doctor asked me.>>Anyway, I went to the hospital and the doctor asked me"Do you have a headache?">>CorrectI want to say that I have some headache which is dopey.
>>I wanted to tell him that I have a terrible headache and I feel dizzy.so I said>>Correct. J"I have a stupid head.">>Correct
>>I have a terrible headache (better)as soon as I finished my word he laughed loudly.>as soon as I finished talking he laughed out loudand repeated " stupit head, stupid head...." >And I repeated 뱒tupid head, stupid head
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