sashimi is my love.

2010-09-15 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Our department is having a get-together this evening. We are going to the japanese restaurant. Although I am sick because of a fever from a cold I'll join the meeting. Because I love sushi and sashimi very much. and japanese food, it is 30000 [이름] a head, not cheap for me. So I think I'll fill my self with a sashimi and I'll go home. hahaha.. Am I cheap? ^^ Anyway. When I went to the hospital a doctor asked me. "Do you have a headache?" I want to say that I have some headache which is dopey. so I said "I have a stupid head." as soon as I finished my word he laughed loudly. and repeated " stupit head, stupid head...." hum...Is it funny? I blushed at his laugh. but I'm not upset It's just laugh. ^^ bye lei~~~^^

강사 첨삭

Hi Ju [이름]! I believe that you need to work a little more on writing and your sentence structure skills though you have tried your best. Keep on trying and practice more often. Writing me everyday would be very helpful. Lei J   Our department is having a get-together this evening. >>correct >>Our department is having a party this evening (better)We are going to the Japanese restaurant. >>we are heading to a Japanese RestaurantAlthough I am sick because of a fever from a cold I'll join the meeting. >>Even though I have a fever due to the cold I had, I will still attend the meetingBecause I love sushi and sashimi very much. and japanese food, it is 30000 [이름] a head, not cheap for me.>I love Japanese food like sushi and sashimi but they cost too much for me. We could spend 30000 [이름] per person.So I think I'll fill myself with a sashimi and I'll go home.>>So I will eat a lot of sashimi before I will go homehahaha..>>JAm I cheap? ^^ >Do you think I뭢 cheap? Anyway. When I went to the hospital a doctor asked me.>>Anyway, I went to the hospital and the doctor asked me"Do you have a headache?">>CorrectI want to say that I have some headache which is dopey. >>I wanted to tell him that I have a terrible headache and I feel dizzy.so I said>>Correct. J"I have a stupid head.">>Correct >>I have a terrible headache (better)as soon as I finished my word he laughed loudly.>as soon as I finished talking he laughed out loudand repeated " stupit head, stupid head...." >And I repeated 뱒tupid head, stupid head

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