Saturday 1
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I _ a shower when you called.
was taking
2. My brother _ to Europe until he went there last year.
had never been
3. Diane _ very sick but she decided to go out anyway.
was feeling
4. He _ her all night.
call
5. I _ to go swimming but the water was too cold.
wanted
6. I _ able to sleep well for a week now.
haven't been
7. When I first saw her, she _ on the balcony.
was standing
8. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long _ there?
have you been living
9. Every time I see that movie, it _ me cry.
makes
10. I _ smoking three years ago.
have stopped
Saturday, I woke up at 6 a.m even I slept at 2 a.m. and I went to my work place.
Before I started to wor, I played tennis for one hour. I'm not good at tennis, so I wanted to practice service. I think I nearly stroke 200 balls. I did my best to strike balls. When I finished smashing balls. I felt that I really tired on my knee and arm. After playing tennis alone, I started to work. About 10 a.m, I called her and woke her up.
강사 첨삭
Good evening again!
Wow! You are really sweet!
You always call her and let her feel that she\'s so special.
I admire you for that. ^^
Wow! I am not good at playing tennis. Hahaha!
I think it\'s really difficult.
Good job with your homework. Keep it up! Please aim higher. I know you can do it!
Teacher Nina
1. I _ a shower when you called.was taking
>> Correct! 2. My brother _ to Europe until he went there last year.had never been
>> Correct! 3. Diane _ very sick but she decided to go out anyway.was feeling
>> Correct! 4. He _ her all night.call
>> was calling 5. I _ to go swimming but the water was too cold.wanted
>> Correct! 6. I _ able to sleep well for a week now.haven\'t been
>> Correct! 7. When I first saw her, she _ on the balcony.was standing
>> Correct! 8. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long _ there?have you been living
>> Correct! 9. Every time I see that movie, it _ me cry.makes
>> Correct! 10. I _ smoking three years ago.have stopped>> stopped
Saturday, I woke up at 6 a.m even I slept at 2 a.m. and I went to my work place.
>> Last Saturday, I slept at 2 a.m. and woke upt at 6 a.,m. then I went to my workplace. Before I started to wor, I played tennis for one hour.
>> Correct! ( work ^^)
I\'m not good at tennis, so I wanted to practice service.
>> Correct!
I think I nearly stroke 200 balls.
>> Correct!
I did my best to strike balls.
>> Correct!
When I finished smashing balls.
>> When I finished smashing the balls.
I felt that I really tired on my knee and arm.
>> I felt tired especially my knees and arms.
After playing tennis alone, I started to work.
>> Correct!
About 10 a.m, I called her and woke her up.
>> Correct!
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