Saturday 1

2014-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I _ a shower when you called. was taking 2. My brother _ to Europe until he went there last year. had never been 3. Diane _ very sick but she decided to go out anyway. was feeling 4. He _ her all night. call 5. I _ to go swimming but the water was too cold. wanted 6. I _ able to sleep well for a week now. haven't been 7. When I first saw her, she _ on the balcony. was standing 8. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long _ there? have you been living 9. Every time I see that movie, it _ me cry. makes 10. I _ smoking three years ago. have stopped Saturday, I woke up at 6 a.m even I slept at 2 a.m. and I went to my work place. Before I started to wor, I played tennis for one hour. I'm not good at tennis, so I wanted to practice service. I think I nearly stroke 200 balls. I did my best to strike balls. When I finished smashing balls. I felt that I really tired on my knee and arm. After playing tennis alone, I started to work. About 10 a.m, I called her and woke her up.

강사 첨삭

Good evening again! Wow! You are really sweet! You always call her and let her feel that she\'s so special. I admire you for that. ^^ Wow! I am not good at playing tennis. Hahaha! I think it\'s really difficult. Good job with your homework. Keep it up! Please aim higher. I know you can do it! Teacher Nina   1. I _ a shower when you called.was taking >> Correct! 2. My brother _ to Europe until he went there last year.had never been >> Correct! 3. Diane _ very sick but she decided to go out anyway.was feeling >> Correct! 4. He _ her all night.call >> was calling 5. I _ to go swimming but the water was too cold.wanted >> Correct! 6. I _ able to sleep well for a week now.haven\'t been >> Correct! 7. When I first saw her, she _ on the balcony.was standing >> Correct! 8. Really? You moved to a new apartment? How long _ there?have you been living >> Correct! 9. Every time I see that movie, it _ me cry.makes >> Correct! 10. I _ smoking three years ago.have stopped>> stopped Saturday, I woke up at 6 a.m even I slept at 2 a.m. and I went to my work place. >> Last Saturday, I slept at 2 a.m. and woke upt at 6 a.,m. then I went to my workplace. Before I started to wor, I played tennis for one hour. >> Correct! ( work ^^) I\'m not good at tennis, so I wanted to practice service. >> Correct! I think I nearly stroke 200 balls. >> Correct! I did my best to strike balls. >> Correct! When I finished smashing balls. >> When I finished smashing the balls. I felt that I really tired on my knee and arm. >> I felt tired especially my knees and arms. After playing tennis alone, I started to work. >> Correct! About 10 a.m, I called her and woke her up. >> Correct!

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