Saturday 2
학생이 쓴 원문
1.You are not allowed to smoke on the airplane.
2.I couldn't help laughing when he tripped!
3.I enjoy going to clubs.
4.She expects people to help her, but she never helps anyone!
5. My doctor advised me to quit smoking.
6. Please stop shouting. I can hear you fine!
7. I don't feel like cooking. Let's go out to a restaurant.
8. Would you mind opening the window? It's very hot in here.
9. My remote control doesn't work. Try to change the batteries.
10. In Los Angeles, smoking is not allowed in any building.
Saturday was the day that we planed to go riverside. we met in front of her house.
Before meeting her, I bought some snacks for her. She also prepared something to eat. We headed to south and found some place where water flows. We settled and ate food which she cooked and took a rest. Of course we put our legs in the water. It was good. She drank two cans of beer. but I didn't because I had to drive my car. We took a enough rest and even we fell a sleep riverside.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!Wow! You made this homework the day after your birthday last year, May 31st. Hahaha!
I really appreciate it a lot. ^^ Thanks again. I can really see your improvements here and there. I am so proud of you.
Please work on vocabulary skills more. I know you can do it. Take Care!
Have fun tonight. Take Care!
Teacher Nina
1.You are not allowed to smoke on the airplane.
>> Correct! 2.I couldn\'t help laughing when he tripped!
>> Correct! 3.I enjoy going to clubs.
>> Correct! 4.She expects people to help her, but she never helps anyone!
>> Correct! 5. My doctor advised me to quit smoking.
>> Correct! 6. Please stop shouting. I can hear you fine!
>> Correct! 7. I don\'t feel like cooking. Let\'s go out to a restaurant.
>> Correct! 8. Would you mind opening the window? It\'s very hot in here.
>> Correct! 9. My remote control doesn\'t work. Try to change the batteries.
>> changing10. In Los Angeles, smoking is not allowed in any building.
>> Correct! Saturday was the day that we planed to go riverside.
>> Last Saturday was the day that we planned to go to the riverside.
we met in front of her house.
>> Correct!
Before meeting her, I bought some snacks for her.
>> Correct!
She also prepared something to eat.
>> Correct!
We headed to south and found some place where water flows.
>> We headed to the south and found some places where water flows.
We settled and ate food which she cooked and took a rest.
>> We settled down and ate the food which she cooked and took a rest.
Of course we put our legs in the water.
>> Correct!
It was good.
>> Correct!
She drank two cans of beer.
>> Correct!
but I didn\'t because I had to drive my car.
>> Correct!
We took a enough rest and even we fell a sleep riverside.
>> We took enough rest and even fell asleep along the riverside.
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