Saturday 3
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Please be quiet (while) the teacher is talking.
2. She won the (second) prize.
3. Your children look very (healthy).
4. (Does) he play baseball after school?
5. (Because) she wanted it, she bought it.
Going on my way home, I wanted to explore new way so I didn't turn on the navigation which lead us to the shortest way to home. It was a bit difficult and I finally lost our way. However we arriverd at the top of mountain which have a deadend of the road. We had to get back on the way but the scenary was great. Going to home, we felt hungry so we visited some restaurant which serves many kinds of food. we enjoyed a meal. I realized that I have to turn on the navigation because I didn't want to lost my way again. When we arrived at the city where we are living. It was neally 10 P.M and Carolyn didn't want to go home early so we decided to go PC room and we played gun shot game. we had a really great Saturday.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
Your performance is doing great.
I am so happy that you always take corrections in a positive way.
Please work on your enunciation, fluency, grammar and vocabulary. ^_^
I am really glad that you are eager to learn. ^^Keep up the great attitude,
Teacher Nina
1. Please be quiet (while) the teacher is talking.
>> Correct!
2. She won the (second) prize.
>> Correct!
3. Your children look very (healthy).
>> Correct!
4. (Does) he play baseball after school?
>> Correct!
5. (Because) she wanted it, she bought it.
>> Correct!
Going on my way home, I wanted to explore new way so I didn\'t turn on the navigation which lead us to the shortest way to home.
>> On our way home. I wanted to explore a new way so I didn\'t turn on the navgation which will lead us the shortest way home.
It was a bit difficult and I finally lost our way.
>> It was a bit difficult and I almost lost the way.
However we arriverd at the top of mountain which have a deadend of the road.
>> However, we arrived at the top of the mountain which has a dead end.
We had to get back on the way but the scenary was great.
>> we had to get back on our way home but the scenery was great.
Going to home, we felt hungry so we visited some restaurant which serves many kinds of food.
>> On our way home, we felt hungry so we visited a restaurant which serves many kinds of food.
we enjoyed a meal.
>> Correct!
I realized that I have to turn on the navigation because I didn\'t want to lost my way again.
>> I realized that I have to turn on the nagivation because I didn\'t want to get lost again.
>> OR: I realized that I have to turn on the navigation because I don\'t want to take the wrong way again.
When we arrived at the city where we are living.
>> Correct!
It was neally 10 P.M and Carolyn didn\'t want to go home early so we decided to go PC room and we played gun shot game.
>> It was nearly 10 p.m. and Carolyn didn\'t want to go home early. So, we decided to go to the PC room and played a gun shot game.
we had a really great Saturday.
>> Correct!
Your performance is doing great.
I am so happy that you always take corrections in a positive way.
Please work on your enunciation, fluency, grammar and vocabulary. ^_^
I am really glad that you are eager to learn. ^^Keep up the great attitude,
Teacher Nina
1. Please be quiet (while) the teacher is talking.
>> Correct!
2. She won the (second) prize.
>> Correct!
3. Your children look very (healthy).
>> Correct!
4. (Does) he play baseball after school?
>> Correct!
5. (Because) she wanted it, she bought it.
>> Correct!
Going on my way home, I wanted to explore new way so I didn\'t turn on the navigation which lead us to the shortest way to home.
>> On our way home. I wanted to explore a new way so I didn\'t turn on the navgation which will lead us the shortest way home.
It was a bit difficult and I finally lost our way.
>> It was a bit difficult and I almost lost the way.
However we arriverd at the top of mountain which have a deadend of the road.
>> However, we arrived at the top of the mountain which has a dead end.
We had to get back on the way but the scenary was great.
>> we had to get back on our way home but the scenery was great.
Going to home, we felt hungry so we visited some restaurant which serves many kinds of food.
>> On our way home, we felt hungry so we visited a restaurant which serves many kinds of food.
we enjoyed a meal.
>> Correct!
I realized that I have to turn on the navigation because I didn\'t want to lost my way again.
>> I realized that I have to turn on the nagivation because I didn\'t want to get lost again.
>> OR: I realized that I have to turn on the navigation because I don\'t want to take the wrong way again.
When we arrived at the city where we are living.
>> Correct!
It was neally 10 P.M and Carolyn didn\'t want to go home early so we decided to go PC room and we played gun shot game.
>> It was nearly 10 p.m. and Carolyn didn\'t want to go home early. So, we decided to go to the PC room and played a gun shot game.
we had a really great Saturday.
>> Correct!
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