Saturday diary
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I didn't have appointment on last saturday,but suddenly I received a message from my sister in the morning that is to go out for dinner.So I accepted her suggestion, then,I met my sister and her husband.We ate 'Sam kye tang'.It was so delicious, especially there was a 'Nu reung ji'with soup,it was also good.And we talked any tasks, then, went to the coffe shop where is located on the famous cafe road.I drank 'Americano',because of the bitter taste I like 'Americano',I felt happy.As long time goes by,we left cafe, and came back to home. I was happy to meet my familiy and ate delicious foods.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Wow, I think you had a great time because of this.
Actually, I can뭪 imagine the food you ate, but it really sounds delicious.
See you tonight in class,
Connie
I didn't have appointment on last saturday,but suddenly I received a message from my sister in the morning that is to go out for dinner.
>> I didn뭪 have any appointments last Saturday except for a message from my sister that we will go out for dinner.
So I accepted her suggestion, then,I met my sister and her husband.
>> I accepted her invitation and so I met my sister and her husband.
>> For your sister뭩 husband you can say 뱈y brother-in-law
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