Saturday, we went to wedding

2014-01-20 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.She was angry ___ being left alone. a. with 2.That woman dressed ___ is my neighbor. a. in black 3.I'm sure there's no secret between ___ a. you and I. 4.I must ___ the bill today. a. pay 5.The dentist told him ___ forget to brush his teeth beforegoing to bed. a. not to 6.___ such bad accident. a. Never I have seen 7.I don't know where ___ a. the bookstore is. 8.She has just finished reading ___ chapters of the book. b. the first two 9.What _ this is! b. a delicious coffee 10.He was _ for murder. b. hanged A Friend of mine had a wedding on this weekend. So Carolyn and I participated ceremony. I met many friends in there. I said hello to groom. We ate a lot at wedding buffet. there were many kinds of food. Carolyn was appreciate about that. After wedding, we decided to go another place. Wedding was held in Jun-ju, the born place of carolyn. So Carolyn leaded me and set a date course. First we went to theather to watch a movie. we chose movie about the north korean agent story

강사 첨삭

Hello there,
It was nice of you to write about your weekend activities. I know that writing an essay could be a big step for you to improve your skills. Continue to enhance your skills because you have the potentials in developing your skills.^^
Have a great day!!!
Please check the corrections that I\'ve made on our homework.
Feel free to ask questions, if you want to clarify something about it.
T. Nina^^

1.She was angry ___ being left alone.
a. with
>> B
2.That woman dressed ___ is my neighbor.
a. in black
>> correct
3.I\'m sure there\'s no secret between ___
a. you and I.
>> B
4.I must ___ the bill today.
a. pay
>> correct
5.The dentist told him ___ forget to brush his teeth beforegoing to bed.
a. not to
>> correct
6.___ such bad accident.
a. Never I have seen
>> B
7.I don\'t know where ___
a. the bookstore is.
>> correct
8.She has just finished reading ___ chapters of the book.
b. the first two
>> correct
9.What _ this is!
b. a delicious coffee
>> correct
10.He was _ for murder.
b. hanged
>> correct

A Friend of mine had a wedding on this weekend.
>> A friend of mine had a wedding this weekend.
So Carolyn and I participated ceremony.
>> So, Carolyn and I participated the ceremony.
I met many friends in there.
>> I met my friends there.
I said hello to groom.
>> I said, \"Hello,\" to the groom.
We ate a lot at wedding buffet.
>> We ate a lot at the wedding buffet.
there were many kinds of food.
>> There were many kinds of food.
Carolyn was appreciate about that.
>> Carolyn appreciated that.
After wedding, we decided to go another place.
>> After the wedding, we decided to go to another place.
Wedding was held in Jun-ju, the born place of carolyn.
>> The wedding was held in Jun-ju, the birth place of Carolyn.
So Carolyn leaded me and set a date course.
>>So, Carolyn fixed our schedule.
First we went to theather to watch a movie.
>> First, we went to the theater to watch a movie.^^
we chose movie about the north korean agent story
>> We chose a movie about a North Korean Agent\'s story.^^

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기