Saving money

Saving money is a good thing because you can buy something that you need. I have my poket money and I have my own bankacount. I use money to buy school things. I earn money if I help mum like go to the shop and buy ice cream. If you spend money on unnessarcy things you will have no money left and become street people. When I earn lots of money I'm going to buy my dad a new car. So we have to spend money in nessarcy things, Okay?

Hi there Min!:) Happy Thursday!   I totally and definitely agree with you that saving money now will be a big help in the future. I should have done it when I was your age but then I didn\'t really live a convenient life. Now that I\'m working, it\'s even harder to save because I have more responsibilities now than before. So now that you have the opportunity and the means to save, save as much as you can. You never know what might happen in the future but surely your savings will be useful.   Thank you dear for this composition. I\'m glad that you are doing or practicing in real life the things that we discussed or learned in class. Stay positive. Bye for now!^_^   ~Teacher Mayleen~     Saving money is a good thing because you can buy something that you need. >> CORRECT OR: Saving money is important because you can use it to buy the things that you need in the future.   I have my poket money and I have my own bankacount. >> I have my pocket monay and I also have my own bank account. I THINK POCKET MONEY IS THE SAME WITH ALLOWANCE.   I use money to buy school things. >> I use my savings to buy my school supplies.   I earn money if I help mum like go to the shop and buy ice cream. >> I can earn money from my mom by going to the shop to buy ice cream.   If you spend money on unnessarcy things you will have no money left and become street people. >> If you spend your money on unnecessary things you might end up as a penniless person living in the streets. When I earn lots of money I\'m going to buy my dad a new car. >> When I\'m earning lots of money already, I\'m going to buy my dad a new car. So we have to spend money in nessarcy things, Okay? >> So we have to spend money wisely, okay?