say hello first time!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Dorcy,
sorry for not joining our class for 4 days due to my busy day this week.
from next week, I will join our class without absence to make us in a one team for approaching the high level of english as much as I can.
have a nice holiday from tomorrow upto Sun and start your time with me coming next week.
thanks,
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I\'m glad to hear that we can finally meet each other next week.
I wonder what your voice sounds like.
Anyways, enjoy the holiday and the rest of the weekend!
See you next week! ^_^
---T.Dorcy---
Hello Dorcy,
>>Correct^^
sorry for not joining our class for 4 days due to my busy day this week.
>>I\'m sorry for not being able to attend our class for four days this week because I was very busy.from next week, I will join our class without absence to make us in a one team for approaching the high level of english as much as I can.
>>Starting next week, I will join our class as much as I can without absences so we can work together as a team in achieving a higher level of English skills.have a nice holiday from tomorrow upto Sun and start your time with me coming next week.
>>Enjoy your long weekend and start your session with me next week.thanks,
>>Correct^^
>>Thanks![이름]
>>Correct^^
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