Say something about something that you can’t resist in a maximum of 5 sentences.

2015-10-05 · 첨삭 강사 Carmen

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I can’t resist are as follows. First of all, I do like who do not obey the traffic rules. For example, drunk driving. I t can gives a threat to the lives of innocent people. In addition, I hate those who put something harmful into the food. A few years ago, I heard from the news that many babies were died or injured because they ate fake milk powder. Many people were surprised at that time.

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Good Evening, [이름]! Thank you for answering your homework. You really never fail to surprise me with your thoughts! I really appreciate your effort to answer today\'s topic! Keep on practicing your writing skills and soon you can master the correct way to express your thoughts in English! Great job! See you in class tomorrow! I\'m so excited to hear your stories! :)))   Teacher Carmen ^^   I can’t resist are as follows. >> Here are the things that I can\'t resist. First of all, I do like who do not obey the traffic rules. >> First of all, I do not like those who disobey traffic rules. For example, drunk driving. >> For example, driving with the influence of alcohol.    I t can gives a threat to the lives of innocent people. >> It is a threat to the lives of innocent people. In addition, I hate those who put something harmful into the food. >> In addition, I hate those people who put something harmful into food.   A few years ago, I heard from the news that many babies were died or injured because they ate fake milk powder. >> I heard from the news that there were many babies who died or were injured because they drank poisonous milk powder a few years ago.   Many people were surprised at that time. >> Correct! OR>> Many people were shocked at that time.

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