Say something about the proudest moment of your life.

2015-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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Actually, I do not have the proud moment of my life. Although I have always tried to be successful, I did not get a good result. I want to succeed in some future.

강사 첨삭

Happy happy Friday, Sung Hoon!   Wheew, the most exciting day has come already. ^^ How do you feel? Anyway, tell me about that later in our class. Really? Don\'t you not have anything to be proud of? I guess, the best is yet to come. ^^ And don\'t worry, you will soon achieve your dream of becoming a very rich and successful software engineer.^^ See you later in class. Bye.   ~~T. Jamie^^   Actually, I do not have the proud moment of my life. >> Actually, I do not have any proud moment in my life. OR: >> Actually, I do not have anything to be proud of.Although I have always tried to be successful, I did not get a good result. >> CORRECT I want to succeed in some future. >> I want to succeed in the future. OR: >> I want to succeed sometime in the future.  

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