Say something about the proudest moment of your life.
학생이 쓴 원문
Actually, I do not have the proud moment of my life.
Although I have always tried to be successful, I did not get a good result.
I want to succeed in some future.
강사 첨삭
Happy happy Friday, Sung Hoon!
Wheew, the most exciting day has come already. ^^ How do you feel? Anyway, tell me about that later in our class.
Really? Don\'t you not have anything to be proud of? I guess, the best is yet to come. ^^
And don\'t worry, you will soon achieve your dream of becoming a very rich and successful software engineer.^^
See you later in class. Bye.
~~T. Jamie^^
Actually, I do not have the proud moment of my life.
>> Actually, I do not have any proud moment in my life.
OR:
>> Actually, I do not have anything to be proud of.Although I have always tried to be successful, I did not get a good result.
>> CORRECT
I want to succeed in some future.
>> I want to succeed in the future.
OR:
>> I want to succeed sometime in the future.
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