Say something about true love in a maximum of 5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
I think someone meet true love in his life is not easy.
We can see in TV that some people are looking for spouse who has a lot of money and back ground.
If they get married, they are likely to live together without love.
In my opinion, true love can be defined that both of couple can give up difficulties in hard environment.
강사 첨삭
A great Evening to you, [이름]!! :)
Thank you for sharing your idea of what true love is. I totally agree with your idea! Good job!!
Like what it says in the Bible,
\"Love is patient. Love is kind. Love doesn\'t envy.
It does not boast. It is not proud. It is not rude. It is not self-seeking. It is not easily angered. It keeps no record of wrongs.Love does not in evil but rejoices for the truth. It always trusts, always hopes and always perseveres. Love never fails.\"
So I hope that you will receive that kind of love because I know you are a very genuine person!
Teacher Carmen ^^
I think someone meet true love in his life is not easy.
>> I think meeting someone that you can have true love with is not easy.
We can see in TV that some people are looking for spouse who has a lot of money and back ground.
>> We can see on TV that there are some people who are looking for their spouses who have a lot of money and a good background.
If they get married, they are likely to live together without love.
>> If they get married, they will live together but they might not love each other.
In my opinion, true love can be defined that both of couple can give up difficulties in hard environment.
>> In my opinion, true love is defined by a couple who are both willing to face difficulties together in a harsh environment.
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