Say something about your favorite time with your family.

2015-08-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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My family went to Jeju island in 2013. In Jeju, we had a lot of fun. Especially, we rode a horse. It was my first time to ride a horse. I think it was very meaningful experience. Our family could get intimate more.

강사 첨삭

Hello there again. ^^   Wow. I\'m really impressed with your great interest in learning the English language. Don\'t stop until here, continue to learn more and inspire others as well. Check the correction below and I\'m giving this website as your reference on the proper usage of \'verb + horse\' (http://conjugation.com/verb/ride%20horseback)   See you later.   ~~T. Jamie^^   My family went to Jeju island in 2013. >> My family went to Jeju Island in 2013. In Jeju, we had a lot of fun. Especially, we rode a horse. >> We had a lot of fun in Jeju, especially when we rode horseback. OR: >> We had a lot of fun in Jeju, especially when we had a horseback riding.It was my first time to ride a horse. >> It was my first time to ride horseback.I think it was very meaningful experience. >> I think it was a very meaningful experience.Our family could get intimate more. >> Our family became closer with each other. OR: >> Our family\'s relationship has become even more intimate.

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