Say something to the globe.
학생이 쓴 원문
If there is only one sentence that I am willing to say to the world, it would be \"Please look after what you have thought negligible\". There are so many important things that are regarded to hold the least significance or are even unnoticed since we take them for granted. For instance, in Korea, delivery service has become an essential part of our daily lives. Products that are expected to be shipped right in front of the door are in various types, ranging from a cup of coffee to home appliances or even car washing service. It is undeniable that this quick and well-customized service provides individuals with lots of convenience and time to tackle other matters. However, we shouldn\'t disregard the immovable fact that there are normally low-paid workers who take their own parts in the whole process of shipping, silently enabling the world to move forward. It doesn\'t necessarily mean we should do something big in favor of them, in fact, small expression of gratitude might be enough.
강사 첨삭
Hi Drexel. Thank you for this perfectly done homework and for your effort. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Well, if you would ask me, I would say some profanities first and tell all the people that they are the worst kinds but then I would say that \"please prove that we are not the worst kinds and prove that there is still hope in humanity!\" ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
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There are so many important things that are regarded to hold the least significance or are even unnoticed since we take them for granted.
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For instance, in Korea, delivery service has become an essential part of our daily lives.
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Products that are expected to be shipped right in front of the door are in various types, ranging from a cup of coffee to home appliances or even car washing service.
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It is undeniable that this quick and well-customized service provides individuals with lots of convenience and time to tackle other matters.
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However, we shouldn\'t disregard the immovable fact that there are normally low-paid workers who take their own parts in the whole process of shipping, silently enabling the world to move forward.
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It doesn\'t necessarily mean we should do something big in favor of them, in fact, small expression of gratitude might be enough.
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