Saying apology
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Hi John,
Indeed saying sorry is not easy but it's essential to make any relationship work. Talk to you soon.
Teacher May.
Saying sorry is a important thing in our life.
>>Saying sorry is an important thing in our life.
If someone did somthing wrong to other have to say "sorry".
>>If someone did somthing wrong to other person, he have to say "sorry".
We have to know and understand what we did wrong.
>>CORRECT
Acyually I don't like saying sorry because it's a shameful and shy to myself
>>Actually I don't like saying sorry because it's a shame and I'm shy.
So when I did something which I need to apologize, I say"sorry" verym fast.
>>So when I did something which I need to apologize for, I say"sorry" very fast.
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