scardey cat
학생이 쓴 원문
tiger is a trong cat.
but he was not brave.
he is scared of a truck, and the dark, and he was even afraid of a mouse!
then one day tiger was taking a nap.
then he saw a mouse.
and tiger was scared. and the mouse was scared too.
so he ran.
and tiger ran too.
but then that mouse went to the road.
so tiger ran to that mouse.
then tiger take the mouse to it's house.
and affter that day, tiger was a brave cat.
THE END
BYE
강사 첨삭
Hello Ji[이름]! What an interesting story! Thank you for sharing it with me.
Please observe proper capitalization when you write your composition.
Check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
tiger is a trong cat.
>> CORRECT!
>> strong but he was not brave.
>> CORRECT! he is scared of a truck, and the dark, and he was even afraid of a mouse!
>> He was scared of a truck, the dark and even a mouse!then one day tiger was taking a nap.
>> One day, Tiger was taking a nap.then he saw a mouse.
>> CORRECT! and tiger was scared.
>> Tiger got scared.
and the mouse was scared too.
>> CORRECT! so he ran.
>> CORRECT! and tiger ran too.
>> CORRECT! but then that mouse went to the road.
>> But that mouse went out on the road.so tiger ran to that mouse.
>> So Tiger ran after the mouse.then tiger take the mouse to it\'s house.
>> He took the mouse to his house.and affter that day, tiger was a brave cat.
>> After that day, Tiger became a brave cat.THE END
>> CORRECT! BYE
>> CORRECT!
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