Scheudles are too tiring.

2019-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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These days I am really tired. Going to school and having more than 6hours class makes me really tired. I signed up new math academy and it became over a week. Going math academy is a little far and the time about the math class is longer. And I have to review all the subjects I had learn. In the past I wasn\'t sleepy in the evening but now I went asleep after lying in the bedroom.

강사 첨삭

These days I am really tired.

>> These days, I am really tired.

or

>> These days, I feel really exhausted.

Going to school and having more than 6hours class makes me really tired.

>> Correct

I signed up new math academy and it became over a week.

>> I signed up for a new academy and it was over in a week.

Going math academy is a little far and the time about the math class is longer. And I have to review all the subjects I had learn.

>>  Going to the Math academy is a little far and the time for the Math class is longer. I have to review all the subjects I had learned.

In the past I wasn\'t sleepy in the evening but now I went asleep after lying in the bedroom.

>> In the past, I was not sleepy in the evening but now I fell asleep just after lying on my bed.

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