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Today, the school's president was elected. The presdient - yoon [이름] min - she is a girl but her characteristic is so bad. The vice president 6th grade - kim yoon tae he is a great one. I hoped he being the president. Choi- han- byeol - she is became vice presdient because it was just luck. She became presdient because there was only 2 girl president who wanted to be class president. One was elected as vice presdient then she is elected even though she got no points. The vice presdient - 5th grade. I think those two can lead the 5th grade well.

Hello Joey! You did really well in writing this composition. I noticed a few mistakes in your verb tenses and your capitalization. I know you can improve this by practicing more. I hope these leaders will govern your grade well. Have a nice evening! Karla   Today, the school's president was elected. >>Correct OR>>Our school-president was elected today.The presdient - yoon [이름] min - she is a girl but her characteristic is so bad. >> The presidend is yoon [이름] Min, she is a girl but her characteristics are so bad.The vice president 6th grade - kim yoon tae he is a great one. >>The vice president of the 6th grade si Kim Yoon Tae, he is a great one. I hoped he being the president. >>I hoped that he would be the president. Choi- han- byeol - she is became vice presdient because it was just luck. >>Choi Han Byeol became vice president because of luck. She became presdient because there was only 2 girl president who wanted to be class president. >> She became presdient because there were only 2 girl presidents who wanted to be the class president. One was elected as vice presdient then she is elected even though she got no points.>> One was elected as vice presdient then she was elected even though she got no points. The vice presdient - 5th grade. >>The vice president of the 5th grade. I think those two can lead the 5th grade well. >>Correct OR>>I think those two will be able to govern the 5th grade nicely.