School

2015-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I am in fourths grade in Yeongyang Elementary school.School is a fun place where you can learn things like literacy, maths and sicence. At play time we can play baseball an fotball and it is always fun when I play with my friends. At sports time we learn how to play basketball and skipping rope. I am not that good at skippig ropes. At lunch time we eat school dinner. I love to eat school dinner because it is nutrious and delicious. At weekend I ride bycle with my friends. We swaped our bikes and ride it.

강사 첨삭

Hi MIN! Happy Thursday!:)   Thank you lad for this composition. You\'d always tell things about you or about the things that you. It makes me feel closer to you.^_- You are right, learning is fun and school is a fun place to be. As long as you build good frienship or camaraderie with you fellow students then you won\'t feel out of play or lonely. Good job, Min! See you in class, okay?^_^:p   =T. Mayleen=   I am in fourths grade in Yeongyang Elementary school. >> I am a fourth grader in Yeongyang Elementary school.   School is a fun place where you can learn things like literacy, maths and sicence. >> CORRECT OR: School is a place where you can learn a lot of things in a fun way.   At play time we can play baseball an fotball and it is always fun when I play with my friends. >> On our breaktime, we can play basefall and football and it\'s always fun to play with my friends.   At sports time we learn how to play basketball and skipping rope. >> During sports class, we learn how to play basketball and skip rope.   I am not that good at skippig ropes. >> I am not that good in akip rope.   At lunch time we eat school dinner. >> At noon, we eat lunch in the school cafeteria.   I love to eat school dinner because it is nutrious and delicious. >> I love to eat school meal because it\'s nutritious and delicious.   At weekend I ride bycle with my friends. >> During weekends, I ride bicycle with my friends.   We swaped our bikes and ride it. >> We swap our bikes and ride on them.  

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