School
학생이 쓴 원문
School is a place where students study and learn.
In school we learn licteracy,maths and scinice.
I like licteracy the best and my brother lkes licteracy the best like me but my mom is the only one person who likes the math best.My mom says she likes maths the best because she thinks it's more easier thanlicteracy,science and topic.
We also meet new friends and sometimes play in school.
Teacher Mayleen,why do you think we study in school?
강사 첨삭
Hi EMMA!
Happy Wednesday!^^
Studying is very important. Education, as they say, is your treasure that will never be robbed from you. It is also something that you can teach to the next generation.
Of course, if you will study well today, you\'ll get a good job in the future. I think your parents already told you that.^_^
So Emma, you have to do well in school, okay?:p
See you in class.
~T. Mayleen~
School is a place where students study and learn.
>> CORRECT
In school we learn licteracy,maths and scinice.
>> In school we learn literacy, math, and science.
I like licteracy the best and my brother lkes licteracy the best like me but my mom is the only one person who likes the math best.
>> My brother and I like literacy the best while my mom likes math.
My mom says she likes maths the best because she thinks it\'s more easier thanlicteracy,science and topic.
>> Mom says she likes math because she thinks it\'s easier than literacy.
We also meet new friends and sometimes play in school.
>> We can also meet new friends in school.Teacher Mayleen,why do you think we study in school?
>> CORRECT
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