School adventure{1/6}

2020-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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A: I\'d like to go to Peru because I want to see the \'Rainbow Mt\'. B: Aw, I\'d like to. Have you ever been to Jeju Islend? A: Yes! Jeju is fun! -After the class- A: Do you want to play with me? B: I want to but I have to go to Chinese academy. Bye. A: Whait, what time do you start learning Chinese? B: At 6 O\' clock. A: What time is it know? B: 5:35. A: How long does it take to get there? B: Maybe 15 minutes. A: Ewwwwwwww..............Okay, sorry. I\'ve been dragging your feet. B: That\'s okay. I will quick go. Bye! A: Bye~!! See ya~ B: See ya~! ^^ 5. I don\'t like to...

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

Thank you for sending your homework. 



Cheers!
Jean


A: I\'d like to go to Peru because I want to see the \'Rainbow Mt\'.
>> CORRECT

B: Aw, I\'d like to. Have you ever been to Jeju Islend?
>> Aw, I\'d like to. Have you ever been to Jeju Island?

A: Yes! Jeju is fun!
-After the class-
>> CORRECT

A: Do you want to play with me?
>> Do you want to play together with me?

B: I want to but I have to go to Chinese academy. Bye.
>> I want to but I have to go to my Chinese academy. Bye.

A: Whait, what time do you start learning Chinese?
>> Wait, what time do you start learning Chinese? 
>> or: Wait, what time is your Chinese class?
>> or: Wait, when did you start to learn Chinese?

B: At 6 O\'clock.

A: What time is it know?
>> What time is it now?

B: 5:35.
A: How long does it take to get there?
B: Maybe 15 minutes.
>> CORRECT

A: Ewwwwwwww..............Okay, sorry. I\'ve been dragging your feet.
>> CORRECT

B: That\'s okay. I will quick go. Bye!
>>  That\'s okay. I will quickly go. Bye!

A: Bye~!! See ya~
B: See ya~! ^^
>> CORRECT

5. I don\'t like to...
>> Where\'s your sentence?

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