school aniversary
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is school aniversry, so I don't need to go to school.
But I have something to do untill this week.
Even though I couldn't get up early without difficulty,
I went to my school and finished everything.
I want to praise myself!
강사 첨삭
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Today is school aniversry, so I don't need to go to school.
>>>Today is our school anniversary, so I don't need to go to school.
But I have something to do untill this week.
>>>But I have to do something until this week.
>>>But I have to finish something until this week.
Even though I couldn't get up early without difficulty.
>>>However, I could get up early without difficulty.
I went to my school and finished everything.
>>>correct sentence
I want to praise myself!
>>>correct sentence
>>>OR I am so proud of myself.^^
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