school arts festival
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, we had a school arts festival.
My friend did other songs and gag shows.
I had a play named the merchant of Venice. I was Antonio. There was shylock, Graciano and others.
It was fun
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
It's good to know you enjoy performing as well. Talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ
Today, we had a school arts festival.
>>correct
My friend did other songs and gag shows.
>>My friends did other songs and gag shows.
I had a play named the merchant of Venice. I was Antonio. There was shylock, Graciano and others.
>>I was in a play called the Merchant of Venice. I was Antonio, and the others were Shylock and Graciano.
It was fun
>>correct
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