school baseball
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Today, our class made the list of the baseball sports members.
I'm sometimes the pitcher the relay pitcher. That pitcher comes out in the middle of the game. I'm the RP because I can't throw many balls because it hurts my arm much. However RP throws only small amounts so it's okay for me to do RP. When I'm the batter., I'm the 9th hitter. Some think that 4th is the best and 9th is the worst. However, 9th hitter is much more important than the 5th hitter because I need to connect the game to the 1st player so it's a quite high place. My defence position is left fielder. I'm good at running and iI'm good at catching balls. Also, my shoulder power is quite good too.
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey!
This was a good composition. You were able to write about your position in the team and how you influence the other positions as well. Good job! I hope you'll have a great time being the relay pitcher and the ninth hitter. I also think that these positions suit you well. These are my corrections. Have a nice evening!
Karla
Today, our class made the list of the baseball sports members.
>> Today, our class made the list of the baseball team members.I'm sometimes the pitcher the relay pitcher.
>>I'm sometimes the pitcher, specifically the relay pitcher.
That pitcher comes out in the middle of the game.
>>Correct
OR>>That pitcher appears in the middle of the game.
I'm the RP because I can't throw many balls because it hurts my arm much.
>> I'm the RP because I can't throw balls repeatedly because it hurts my arm much.
However RP throws only small amounts so it's okay for me to do RP.
>> However the RP throws only small amounts so it's okay for me to be the RP.
When I'm the batter., I'm the 9th hitter.
>> When I'm the batter, I'm the 9th hitter.
Some think that 4th is the best and 9th is the worst.
>> Some think that the 4th is the best and the 9th is the worst.
However, 9th hitter is much more important than the 5th hitter because I need to connect the game to the 1st player so it's a quite high place.
>> However, the 9th hitter is much more important than the 5th hitter because I need to connect the game to the 1st player so it's a quite high place.
My defence position is left fielder.
>> My defense position is the left fielder.
I'm good at running and iI'm good at catching balls.
>>Correct
>> I am able to catch balls and run really well.
Also, my shoulder power is quite good too.
>>Correct
OR>> Additionally, my shoulder force is quite good too.
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