School children go on strike for climate change
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1. What was the article about?
The protest of students to government policy about national climate change.
>> CORRECT
2. Would you join a protest for climate change? Why or why not?
Sure I also join the protest. Because the recent my nation\'s climate and atmosphere quality is going bad so I also interested in this problems recently.
>> Yes, I will also join the protest. Because, of my county\'s climate and atmosphere quality is going bad. So, I am also interested in these kinds of problems recently.
3. In our country, what action does the government do to take care of your environment?
In Korea, for reduction of \'fine dust\', the government try to make artificial rain for clean the atmosphere, and take a urgent measure to ban driving specific number of plate. But, I think this is just temporary measure, so It need more long term plan for fundamental solution.
>> In Korea, for reduction of \'fine dust\', the government tried to make an artificial rain for clean the atmosphere, and take an urgent measure to ban driving specific plate numbers. But, I think this is just a temporary measure, so It needs more time to plan for a fundamental solution.
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