School festival
학생이 쓴 원문
Next week Friday is my school festival. Tommorrow they will note about school festival. The school festival is not fun. Many students just love eating at the festival. Yesterday my mom bought a chicken. And it was nice. The chicken was on sale so my mom bought it for 6dollars. This weekend I have a baseball match.
강사 첨삭
Next week Friday is my school festival.
>> Correct
Tommorrow they will note about school festival.
>> Tomorrow they will notify about school festival.
The school festival is not fun.
>> Correct
Many students just love eating at the festival.
>> Correct
Yesterday my mom bought a chicken. And it was nice.
>> Yesterday, my mom bought a chicken and it was nice/delicious.
The chicken was on sale so my mom bought it for 6dollars.
>> Correct
This weekend I have a baseball match.
>> This weekend, I have a baseball match.
or
>>> I have a baseball match this weekend.
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