School festival
학생이 쓴 원문
Tommorrow is school festival. School festival is held once in a year. Last year the school festival was boring. Many teachers are doing their best and spend many times to prepare our school festival.Tommorrow there will be a rain so the school festival will hold just in school.School festival will be end as usal.
강사 첨삭
Tommorrow is school festival.
>> Tomorrow is our school festival.
School festival is held once in a year.
>> Correct
Last year the school festival was boring.
>> Correct
Many teachers are doing their best and spend many times to prepare our school festival.
>> Many teachers do their best and spend a lot of time to prepare for our school festival.
Tommorrow there will be a rain so the school festival will hold just in school.
>> It might rain tomorrow, so the school festival will be held inside.
School festival will be end as usal.
>> The school festival will end as usual.
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