School home work
학생이 쓴 원문
if this H.W. have wrong change this sentence
-The disciples are arranged in groups of three with Jesus at the center.
-The painting features a composition where figures are positioned on one side of the table.
-Unlike previous paintings, Judas the Traitor is depicted in a shaded manner, giving a feeling of exclusion.
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin!
The grammar in each sentence is correct.
However, there are minor adjustments to be done to make your writing clearer.
Take note of the changes below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
The disciples are arranged in groups of three with Jesus at the center.
>> The disciples are arranged in groups of three, with Jesus at the center.
The painting features a composition where figures are positioned on one side of the table.
The painting features a composition where figures are positioned on one side of the table.
>> The painting features a composition where the figures are positioned on one side of the table.
Unlike previous paintings, Judas the Traitor is depicted in a shaded manner, giving a feeling of exclusion.
Unlike previous paintings, Judas the Traitor is depicted in a shaded manner, giving a feeling of exclusion.
>> Unlike in previous paintings, Judas the Traitor is depicted in a shaded manner, giving a feeling of exclusion.
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