School Homework~^^

I have a homework to do it for next week's monday.It's a team project to tell other people Korean's food or food culture.My team is going to tell about rice cakes in hot sauce(in Korean-tteokbokki).And we draw a comic that story about tteokbokki and I wrote some script for the story. Am I right?Please wrote the right script~^^ <Character>:foreigner 1 and 2,clerk,explanationer <Story>:Two foreigner saw a tteokbokki store.They went inside and ate it.But foreigners can't ate them because it's to hot.So clerk gave them many kinds of tteokbokki and they ate it.At the and,explanationer tell tteokbokki's point. <script>-foreigner 1,2:Wow!It's look very delicious!Let's go inside. clerk:Welcome to our store!What do you want? foreigner 1:We want that red thing. foreigner 2:(take a one bite)Oh!It's to hot! clerk:Then try this one. foreingner 1,2:Wow!fantastic!Let's eat more! explanationer:There many kinds of tteokboki and all of them are tasty.Please all ways love our tteokbokki~!

Hello [이름]! These are the corrections to your homework. Good luck to your presentation. ~Teacher Meg I have a homework to do it for next week\'s monday. >>I have a homework for Monday. It\'s a team project to tell other people Korean\'s food or food culture. >>I have a team project that requires us to present about Korean foods and Korean culture. My team is going to tell about rice cakes in hot sauce(in Korean-tteokbokki). >>My team member is going to talk about rice cakes in hot sauce (tteokbokki). And we draw a comic that story about tteokbokki and I wrote some script for the story. >>The team drew a comic strip about tteokbokki and I wrote a script for the story. Am I right?Please wrote the right script~^^>>Is my script right? Please check if my script\'s grammar is right.<Character>:foreigner 1 and 2,clerk,explanationer >>CORRECT!<Story>:Two foreigner saw a tteokbokki store. >>2 foreigners saw a tteokbokki store. They went inside and ate it. >>They went inside and ate some tteokbokki. But foreigners can\'t ate them because it\'s to hot. >>However, foreigners can\'t eat them because it\'s too hot. So clerk gave them many kinds of tteokbokki and they ate it. >>So the clerk gave them many kinds of tteokbokki and the foreigners ate it. At the and,explanationer tell tteokbokki\'s point. >>At the end, the narrator will talk about the tteokbokki\'s taste and ingredients.<script>-foreigner 1,2:Wow!It\'s look very delicious! >>Wow! It looks very delicious. Let\'s go inside. >>CORRECT!clerk:Welcome to our store!What do you want? >>CORRECT!foreigner 1:We want that red thing. >>CORRECT!foreigner 2:(take a one bite) >>(Takes one bite) Oh!It\'s to hot! >>CORRECTclerk:Then try this one.                                                                                                                                                                                                         >>CORRECTforeingner 1,2:Wow!fantastic!Let\'s eat more!                                                                                                                                                                      >>CORRECTexplanationer:There many kinds of tteokboki and all of them are tasty.Please all ways love our tteokbokki~!