School homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! ^^,
Thanks for sharing your favorite painting with me.
I will try to look at it later and let\'s try to talk about it in class.
Have a wonderful Monday afternoon.
Happily,
Teacher Jacey
I will introduce to you about my favorite painting.
>> Correct!
>> OR : I will introduce to you my favorite painting.
My favorite painting is Pablo Picasso\'s Maya with doll.
>> My favorite painting is Pablo Picasso\'s \"Maya with Doll.\"
In the picture, I see his daughter Maya.
>> Correct!
Maya is Pablo Picasso\'s daughter.
>> Correct!
And he drew his daughter.
>> Correct!
She has green hair ,and Maya wore colorful clothes.
>> She has green hair and colorful clothes.
I also see Maya\'s doll.
>> Correct!
It wore a purple clothes,and green cap.
>> It wore purple clothes and a green cap.
Maya\'s doll is laying on her knees.
>> Correct!
This painting is showing main charactor Maya\'s face front and side.
>> This painting is showing the main character, Maya facing front and side.
But it is very interesting that the doll that Maya holds is looking forward to the front.
>> But it is very interesting that the doll Maya is holding is facing front.
Not only the face but also the legs shape are different.
>> Not only the face, but the legs are also shaped differently.
One leg is normal, but the other is when we stand there.
>> One leg is normal but the other is not.
When I look at the picture,I felt strange.
>> When I look at the picture, I feel strange.
Because the Maya in this painting is having a poker face.
>> Because Maya\'s face shows no emotions.
And I was wondering why he didn\'t draw Maya\'s happy face.
>> I was also wondering why he didn\'t draw Maya happy.
So far, I introduced my favorite painting .
>> Correct!
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