School Homework

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Today I want to introduce my favorite animal.

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 My favorite animal is a puppy.

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>> OR: My favorite animal is puppies.

 I like puppies that they have a lot of soft fur.

>>  I like puppies because they have soft fur.

>> OR: I like that puppies have soft fur.

 I have three reasons why I like puppies.

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>> OR: There are three reasons why I like puppies.

First, They are so cute when they come to me with tail waving.

>> First, they are so cute when they come to me with their tail waving.

>> First, they are so cute when they come to me while wagging their tail.

 Sencond, They are so lovely when they feel hungry.

>> Second, they are so lovely when they feel hungry.

>> OR: Second, they are so lovely when are hungry.

 Third, I am very happy when I play with puppies.

>> Correct 

 So, my favorite animal is a puppy.Thank you. 

>> Correct