school's birthday

2012-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

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Today is my school's birthday ^^ but soon ihave an exam so i only studied and playing table tennis Today i get up late so i am glad because i have enough sleeping most my friends are go to pc room because some peaple are smoking some friends are only studing , they want get a score in exam and some friends are go to elementry school because they miss their elementry teacher after today i wil finish go to my English academy because i am too tired but i have prize in English academy because i am a good student i get chocolate set , it is very delicious i am so glad because tomorrow i have a table tannis class

강사 첨삭

Hi Peter, I am so happy that you had and will have a longer time to sleep today. I think you had a lots of fun today. Congratulation once again for being a good student. You\'re smart boy! T.Sheela Today is my school\'s birthday ^^ >>Today is my school\'s anniversary. but soon ihave an exam >>But I will have an exam soon.so i only studied and playing table tennis >>So, I need to study and play table tennis.Today i get up late so i am glad because i have enough sleeping >> Today, I had got up late and I am glad because I had enough sleep.most my friends are go to pc room because some peaple are smoking >> Most of my friends went to the PC room because some people smoke there.some friends are only studing , they want get a score in exam >> Some friends are only studying, they want to get a high score in the exam.and some friends are go to elementry school because they miss their elementry teacher >> And some friends went to there elementary school because they miss their elementary teachers.after today i wil finish go to my English academy because i am too tired >> Next day, I will finish my english academy class because I might feel tired too. >>OR Today, I haveg finish my english academy class because I feel tired too.but i have prize in English academy because i am a good student >>But I had a prize from my English academy class because I am a good student.i get chocolate set , it is very delicious >>I got a set of chocolate and it is very delicious.i am so glad because tomorrow i have a table tannis class >>I am so glad because tomorrow, I will play table tennis in class.

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