School's Winter Vaction is end

2017-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is the last winter vacation.I don't want to go to school.I don't want to see my classmate.I think leaving elementary school is wonderful thing.I slept a lot in Winter vacation.I have to go to elementary school maybe 2 weeks and it will be spring vacation and I will go to the middle school and meet many friends.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I guess you\'ve enjoyed your winter vacation. ^^

Even though you don\'t like going to school, you still have to.

You can still say goodbye to your friends or classmates before going to middle school.

Good luck! I think you\'re excited to meet new friends. ^_^


_Teacher Dianne


Today is the last winter vacation.

>> Today is the last day of our winter vacation.

I don\'t want to go to school.

>> Correct

I don\'t want to see my classmate.

>> I don\'t want to see my classmates.

I think leaving elementary school is wonderful thing.

>> I think leaving our elementary school is a wonderful thing.

I slept a lot in Winter vacation.

>> I slept a lot during my winter vacation.

I have to go to elementary school maybe 2 weeks and it will be spring vacation and I will go to the middle school and meet many friends.

>> I still have to go to elementary school for two weeks and then it will be our spring vacation. After that, I will go to middle school and meet many friends.

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