School's Winter Vaction is end
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I guess you\'ve enjoyed your winter vacation. ^^
Even though you don\'t like going to school, you still have to.
You can still say goodbye to your friends or classmates before going to middle school.
Good luck! I think you\'re excited to meet new friends. ^_^
_Teacher Dianne
Today is the last winter vacation.
>> Today is the last day of our winter vacation.
I don\'t want to go to school.
>> Correct
I don\'t want to see my classmate.
>> I don\'t want to see my classmates.
I think leaving elementary school is wonderful thing.
>> I think leaving our elementary school is a wonderful thing.
I slept a lot in Winter vacation.
>> I slept a lot during my winter vacation.
I have to go to elementary school maybe 2 weeks and it will be spring vacation and I will go to the middle school and meet many friends.
>> I still have to go to elementary school for two weeks and then it will be our spring vacation. After that, I will go to middle school and meet many friends.
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