School trip!
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On our last school trip, we went to Lotte World. Everyone was excited because it was the first picnic in high school. I rode three of the most famous rides in Lotte World with my friends and ate a lot of snacks. We took a lot of pictures and it was a happy and enjoyable time. Everyone fell asleep on the return bus.
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Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
On our last school trip, we went to Lotte World.
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Everyone was excited because it was the first picnic in high school.
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I rode three of the most famous rides in Lotte World with my friends and ate a lot of snacks.
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We took a lot of pictures and it was a happy and enjoyable time.
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Everyone fell asleep on the return bus.
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