School Vacasion
학생이 쓴 원문
My school vacasion started on Christmas eve and it finished on yesturday.
I thought that I would go on a trip with my family and go somewhere fun but I disapointed to know that my mom and dad still had to go out to work.
So I just had to stay at home which is very BORING!!!!!!!
However it was also a little fun to play at home as well^__^~~
강사 첨삭
Hello there dear!^_-
Happy Friday!:)
Well, I understand how disappointed you were that you didn\'t go on a trip last holiday but then you\'ll have to reconsider and think how your parents must be feeling as well. I\'m sure they wanted to have fun moments with you but they had to go to work.
Thank you so much for this composition. I\'ve made some modifications for you to review later on.
I\'ll see you in class!^_^
~T. Mayleen~
My school vacasion started on Christmas eve and it finished on yesturday.
>> My winter vacation began last Christmas eve and ended yesterday.I thought that I would go on a trip with my family and go somewhere fun but I disapointed to know that my mom and dad still had to go out to work.
>> I thought I\'d go on a trip with my family and go somewhere fun but I was disappointed to know that my mom and dad still had to go to work.So I just had to stay at home which is very BORING!!!!!!!
>> I had to stay at home and it was very boring.However it was also a little fun to play at home as well^__^~~
>> However, it was quite fun to play at home.
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