School violence.

Martial arts are booming all over the world. So many students are interested in that. And it makes them attck other students and try some skills to their class mates. Two income family is common nowdays. So they can't teach their children enough these days. That is also the reason why children are getting more violent. If I were a teacher, I will make students play sports together. Playing Sports create strong bond between people. So it can help to prevent shool violence. And I will tell them who makes violence that they will regret their behavior in the future.

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