Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers

Dear [이름],

A delightful Tuesday to you! ^.^

I totally agree with you.

Teachers indeed need evaluations coming from their students.

It\'s their way to know themselves more.

It\'s also a way for them to improve and be better and efficient teachers.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you soon! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: Thanks for doing your homework! ^^ You did a great job! ^^,

It has been trend in Korea that people evaluate their abilities by each others.

>> It has been a trend in Korea for people to evaluate their abilities by themselves or by other people.

I agree with that students have to evaluate their teachers.

>> I agree that student have to evaluate their teachers.

First, I saw many teachers have their lesson books which never developed since they created it.

>> First, I saw many teachers who have lesson books that were never developed since they were created.

It means they do not study their major and try to get new knowledge.

>> CORRECT!

Second, Teachers don\'t know what they are wrong in their lecture if students do not give them feedback.

>> Second, teachers will never know what\'s wrong with their lectures if students do not give them feedback.

Finally, the quality of education will be increased dramatically.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Finally, the quality of education will progress dramatically.

Students will be getting more interesting and professional lectures.

>> CORRECT!

Also, they will constantly attend classes in order to listen to an amazing lecture and make an evaluation of the current teacher.

>> Also, they will constantly attend classes in order to listen to amazing lectures and make evaluations of their current teacher or teachers.

>> OR: In addition, they will constantly attend classes in order to listen to amazing lectures and make evaluations of their current teacher or teachers.

To sum up, I think that evaluation of teachers by their students will bring many benefits and allow students as well as teachers to gain more knowledge and experience.

>> CORRECT!

>> OR: To sum it all up, I think that evaluation of teachers by their students will bring many benefits and allow students as well as teachers to gain more knowledge and experience.