Science facts
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Today, I learned that any kind of substance is more easy to hold inside water than outside.
For example, people feel that they are floating when they are in the water.
Infact, when they measure their weight outside and water, in water is more less weight than outside.
This was what I learned in science class.
강사 첨삭
Nice lesson. I hope that you are really applying the things that you are learning.-Teacher JM
Today, I learned that any kind of substance is more easy to hold inside water than outside.
>>>Today, I learned that any kind of substance is easier to hold inside water than outside.For example, people feel that they are floating when they are in the water.
>>>CorrectInfact, when they measure their weight outside and water, in water is more less weight than outside.
>>>In fact, when they measure their weight in the water, they would find out that they weigh less than outside.
This was what I learned in science class.
>>>Correct
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