Science subjects that I\'ve learned in school
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강사 첨삭
[이름],
Wow! You really love Science. Thanks for trying your best to explain. Excellent! ^^
-Teacher Ash
I\'m interested in electromagnetic induction. Because having the magnet be closer and further at coil is exciting.
>> I\'m interested in electromagnetic induction because moving a magnet closer to or further from a coil is fascinating.
Then I\'ll explain it to you.
>>Let me explain it to you.
Electromagnetic induction is opposite process with using electricity.
>> Electromagnetic induction is the opposite process of using electricity.
It makes electricity unlike motor.
>> It creates electricity just like a motor.
For example, if you prepare a coil and a magnet, please let\'s the magnet move through the coil. So you will find making electricity through above process.
>> For example, if you have a coil and a magnet, move the magnet through the coil, and you will generate electricity through this process.
Electromagnetic induction is commonly like generator.
>>Electromagnetic induction is similar to how a generator works.
If you use this process, you can make the elecity which haven\'t been here.
>>By using this process, you can create electricity where there wasn\'t any before.
It\'s amazing so I like this subject.
>>It\'s amazing, which is why I like this subject.
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