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Today, I had a last meeting with my cup scout team.
I can't do the cup scout next time because ,I'm in the school broadcasting team. So I must choose the broadcasting team.
Today, the teachers gave some students prizes. However, I realized and my friends also realized that only 6th graders got the prize, all 6th graders. This is unfair!!
Last time, they gave us gift cards, but this time no gift cars. LAst time we ate chicken, pizza and other delicious foods but, today we only ate one sandwhich.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.... this is awful
I want gift cards!!!
강사 첨삭
Hello Joey,
Oh that's too bad, I wonder why they didn't give you some good stuff this year. I hope everything works out for you in the broadcasting team. Have a great weekend and take care!
-RJ
Today, I had a last meeting with my cup scout team. >>Today, I had a final meeting with my cub scout team.
I can't do the cup scout next time because ,I'm in the school broadcasting team. So I must choose the broadcasting team.
>>I can't join the cub scouts anymore because I'm with the school broadcasting team now.
Today, the teachers gave some students prizes. However, I realized and my friends also realized that only 6th graders got the prize, all 6th graders. This is unfair!!
>>The teachers gave some students prizes today. However, I and my friends realized that only the 6th graders got prizes, all of them. This is unfair!!
Last time, they gave us gift cards, but this time no gift cars. LAst time we ate chicken, pizza and other delicious foods but, today we only ate one sandwhich.
>>Last time, they gave us gift cards, but this time there were none. We also ate chicken, pizza and other delicious foods the last time but today, we only ate one sandwich.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.... this is awful
>>correct
I want gift cards!!!
>>correct
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