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Hi Lei Than you for your lesson. I complete my script which I will speak at English Debate. This is too long to write here because there is a word limitation in this website. So I devide some parts. would you please check my script? Nowadays, many teenagers want to get a right to vote. Some of you may want to vote for presidents or other representatives. However, in Korea, people who complete their 19th year can vote for all the political elections, so most of high school students cannot participate to the politics. My team also disagrees to such students who want to vote high school students should not be allowed to vote because of the following reasons.

Hi Greg! Wow! This is such a wonderful paperwork. Though the topic is so serious I had fun reading it. You were able to point out your reasons why you disagree with it. It is also straight forward. I revised some of your sentences as well. In fact, you can actually make some revisions too. Great job!! I am so excited to talk to you about it later during our class. See you later Greg!! Lei J                                     Hi Lei Than you for your lesson. I complete my script which I will speak at English Debate. This is too long to write here because there is a word limitation in this website. So I divided some parts. would you please check my script? Nowadays, many teenagers want to get a right to vote. >>correct Some of you may want to vote for presidents or other representatives. >>correct However, in Korea, people who complete their 19th year can vote for all the political elections, so most of the high school students cannot participate to political issues. >>correct My team also disagrees to such students who want to vote high school students should not be allowed to vote because of the following reasons.>>My team disagrees that high school students should not be allowed to vote due to the following reasons: