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학생이 쓴 원문
Except for a few students who read newspapers, they would never know how politics are going on. I can sure because I am also high school students. Also, students are interested in study rather than governments in order to prepare for a university so they have no time to care politics.
Moreover, Since they do not have any information and interest about politics, they would be perfectly affected by environments like parents, province, massmedia and even though teachers. For instance, there were two major candidates in 1997 President Election of Korea, and they were from two biggest political parties. Most provinces mainly support particular candidate due to particular party, not the person or commitment of them.
강사 첨삭
Except for a few students who read newspapers, they would never know how politics are going on.
>> Except for a few students who read newspapers, they would never know what’s going on with the government
I can sure because I am also high school students.
>>I am sure about this because I am also high school students.
Also, students are interested in study rather than governments in order to prepare for a university so they have no time to care politics.>>In addition, students give more time with their studies rather than with the government situation because they needed to enter the university afterwards. With this, somehow students don’t have much time to care about the government.
Since they do not have any information and interest about politics,
>>correct
they would be perfectly affected by environments like parents, province, mass media and even by their teachers.
>>correct
For instance, there were two major candidates in 1997 President Election of Korea, and they were from two biggest political parties.
>>correct
Most provinces mainly support particular candidate due to particular party, not the person or for their commitment
>>correct
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