Script for interview question.

2016-11-17 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What is your major? -> My major is International business. I believed if I learn management, it is easy for me to get a job. Since business department, we are able to take maketing, sales, account and finance. I believed those subject help me to know how company works. 2. What kind of book interest you? -> I prefer to read a novel. Especially I am interested in trade novel. The first trade novel I read was merchant of venice. While I reading that book, I was suprised about their sales strategy and view of certain circumstance. I really empressed about that book, so I read it three times.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday [이름]!! Thank you for taking time to do your homework ^^ I know you are a busy person, and doing this makes me admire you !! Keep it up!! ~Teacher Megan~   Here are my corrections:1. What is your major? My major is International business. >>> YOU CAN ALSO SAY: I\'m majoring in International business.OR >>> I\'m taking up International Business as my major.   I believed if I learn management, it is easy for me to get a job. >>> I believe that If I learn management , it will be easy for me to land a job in the future.>>> I believe that If I took up management course , it will be easy for me to land a job in the future.   Since business department, we are able to take maketing, sales, account and finance.>>> Since it is in the business department, we are able to learn maketing, sales, account and finance.>>> Since it is in the business industry, we are able to learn maketing, sales, account and finance.   I believed those subject help me to know how company works.>>> Correct.>>> OR : I believe that those subject could help me to know more how company works.   2. What kind of book interest you?   I prefer to read a novel. >>> Correct.>>> OR: I prefer novels among other books.   Especially I am interested in trade novel. >>> Especially trade novels.>>> I\'m especially interested with trade novels.   The first trade novel I read was merchant of venice.>> Correct.   While I reading that book, I was suprised about their sales strategy and view of certain circumstance.>>> While reading that book, I was suprised to know about their sales strategy and view of certain circumstance.   I really empressed about that book, so I read it three times. >>> I was really impressed by that book so I read it three times.

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