seafood
학생이 쓴 원문
Personally I am not seriously worry about the pollution of seafood related to Fukushima nuclear power plant.
It is a natural and smart strategy for Japan that they focus n South Korea and the EU.
Maybe it is one of the reason that Koreans consume a lot of seafood in daily life with roasting, soup, and steamed dish.
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Ms. [이름],
Thank you for sharing this. I understand your point that Japan knew the demand for seafood in SOuth Korea that\'s why it became its main exporting country. Have a good day!
Aki~
Personally I am not seriously worry about the pollution of seafood related to Fukushima nuclear power plant.
>>> I am not seriously worried about the pollution of seafood related to the Fukushima nuclear power plant.
It is a natural and smart strategy for Japan that they focus n South Korea and the EU.
>>> It is a natural and smart strategy for Japan they focus on South Korea and the EU.
Maybe it is one of the reason that Koreans consume a lot of seafood in daily life with roasting, soup, and steamed dish.
>>> Maybe it is one of the reasons that Koreans consume a lot of seafood in daily life with roasting, soup, and steamed dishes.
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