Searching for my symptoms online
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When I am sick or feel uncomfortable with a certain part of my body,I search for the symptoms online. There was a time when I was blacked out and I had a temporary memory loss for about 20 minutes. My husband and daughters were surprised and I was shocked at that time. After my family and I searched for the symptoms online, we were relieved. This way, I use online to search for any symptoms or some treatments. But I don\'t necessarily follow the remedies or treatments.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
I see! I also sometimes search for my symptoms online, and while the results can be relieving, they can also be scary due to the many diseases and illnesses that have similar symptoms.
- T. Caitlyn
When I am sick or feel uncomfortable with a certain part of my body, I search for the symptoms online.
>> CORRECT
There was a time when I was blacked out and I had a temporary memory loss for about 20 minutes.
>> There was a time when I blacked out and had temporary memory loss for about 20 minutes.
My husband and daughters were surprised and I was shocked at that time.
>> CORRECT
After my family and I searched for the symptoms online, we were relieved.
>>After my family and I searched for symptoms online, we were relieved.
This way, I use online to search for any symptoms or some treatments.
>> This is how I use the internet to search for symptoms or treatments.
But I don\'t necessarily follow the remedies or treatments.
>> CORRECT
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